AN increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
Of recent, more people are resorting to e-commerce to purchase items they require and desire. This development has led to both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay , both sides will be discused in detail.
First and foremost, online shopping has afforded consumers the opportunity of taking advantage of best deals available in the market. In other words, people can easily browse through several websites with easy to get the cheapest prices which ordinarily would be impossible with traditional shops. For example, in a survey conducted by the Nigerian data association, most respondents confirmed that they visited more than five websites to compare prices before settling for the least expensive. In addition, selling on the internet allows companies reach out to a larger customer base due to the global availability of the internet . For example, the CEO of Konga Nigeria show the companys' sales increased after migration to the Konga cyberstore.
In contrast, the growth of e-commerce also has some downsides. Firstly, it has led to frivilous spending by shoppers. Often time, adverts are targeted at people on social media which can subject them to spontanoues spending. Furthermore, buying online exposes users and organisations to the risk of fraud. Payment and receipt of funds to consumers and sellers respectively require credit cards that are prone to phishing and hacking. In 2017, the Royal bank of Scotland recorded over five hundred cases of unauthorised payments arising from a hacked online payment platform.
To sum up, shopping on line allows people enjoy bargain and also increase target market of companies. However, it encourages inpulse buying and exposes firms and customers to online frauds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, for example, in addition, in contrast, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41851851852 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80004933456 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5860909127 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203443630854 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550337567462 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038536930155 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113823080819 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334182206051 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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