The Diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram above depicts the steps and tools used in the process of making cement, and how cement is used in concrete production for constructional purposes.
Overall, the cement-making process is complex, as it consists of numerous stages and requires various equipment. In contrast, concrete production is more straightforward and need only a few ingredients.
At the beginning of cement production, the crusher makes powder from limestone and clay. Next, this powder goes through the mixer and the rotating heater, where it gets heated by fire. Afterwards, the heated powder goes to the grinder. Finally, the cement is ready to be put on bags and be used in the concrete-making process.
The process of manufacturing concrete is quite simple. it starts with mixing cement, water, sand, and gravel (small stones) together. The proportion of each component is 15%, 10%, 25%, and 50%, respectively. All these four components go to the concrete mixer. Once the mixture is spun there, it is ready to be used in construction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it is ready to be used in construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35542168675 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03177276564 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620481927711 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8052609007 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411648203714 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125767669143 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153328623519 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265207147021 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170116080913 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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