Some people think that children's free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time.
What is your opinion?
Modern educational activities can greatly improve children’s thinking abilities. According to some, children ought to do extra studies during their free time, as these activities will challenge them to be more educated and competitive. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that children should be able to do other activities such as music, art and games as well rather than studying, since they have different preferences and need to enjoy thier childhood.
children should be encouraged to do activities that they like at their spare time. Many students are stressed to do various educational activities by their parents. As a result, this holds back children from exploring their true talent. there are numerous spheres that children need to have an opportunity to express themselves there. Not everyone will become a scientist or a lawer in the future, as some of them will be great actors, successful sportsmen, and famous singers. Therefore, by forceing children to do only educational activities, paretns might miss the chance to reveal their children’s hidden gifts.
children’s free time should consist of leisure activites such as games and sports as well. since they already experience amlpe pressure during their studies, they should rest and enjoy at spare time. playing games with friends can make happy memories for the future. For instance, one of my best childhood memories is playing hide and seak with my classmates after long school day. Moreover, these activities may be beneficial for children’s studies, as they refresh their mind. Thus, children should get most out of their childhood.
In conclusion, it was shown that besides education children should also be engaged in leisure activites, as children have various taste and should be able to take pleasure in what they do as well. Though some believe that educational activities need to be emphasized more, still, in my opinion, children’s free time must mostly include other activites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40557275542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86073137345 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4163656177 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352149581037 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120793579886 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829135521936 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24109574625 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404172334437 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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