Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Of late, it is thought that museums should be the places for entertaining because of earning money and imparting idea easier. Consequently, others believe that it would be better if the function of museums is education which help people learn more about local cultures, where they go, or undertand more about art achivements. I totally agree with the second statement and i am going to outline my opinions below.
First of all, the most reason, why museums should be for entertainment purpose, is getting benefits. Practically, most tourist also want to visit museums (art, war, culture, etc...) to experience the life in another aspect. Therefore, if museums decorate their content variedly and stunningly to be suitable for everyone, they can get ample amount of money. Furthemore, attracting plenty of tourists is a effective way for art aythor express their idea.
On the other hand, it would be more meaningful as well as valuable if museums are used pn educating or supporting people to get information. As many people probably see, recently, taking student to visit museum had been more common not only on history but also on art subjects because normally student prefer to see that they are studying rather than just study in a dry way at school and it help themm acqure knowledge smoothly. For instance, in my case, as a architecture sutdent, i enjoy spending time in museum to improve my creativity skills.
In conclusion, museum is not only a place to entertain or relax but also to get more knowledge. Consequently, each individual must define target and use museum in the most suitable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01119402985 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75267696111 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9923071991 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242268613774 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887854007716 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602166654528 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154202065702 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315458506859 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.