people tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, due to the rapid economic development in most countries, the frequency of work had been increased significantly and it affects not only on employee’s relationship but also the society. Therefore, I agree that the government should limit the working time to improve the productivity.
As many people probably know, the economic development brings ample amount of benefits (living standard, finance, convenience,etc…); nevertheless, people have to work longer and get more problems than before. Practically, most workers must be under pressure particularly money because they have to face with plenty of payment each month or even every day. Firstly, their health would be affected considerably especially eyesight as well as nerve; in reality, there were many people who got problems about eyes and gradually they can not see anymore because of working on computer for along time. Secondly, spending too much time for work is going to affect their family relationships and the society; for instance, there were many children became criminal because their parents too busy to educate them.
Moreover, the performance would be went down if the worker get sick dramatically because of working for along time without taking rest before. In my case, I do not have enough energy to concentrate on my studying if I had a strenuous day before. furthermore, when people feel bored about what they do, their productivity will decrease gradually.
In conclusion, working hardly is necessary to help society developing; however, each individual should have a suitable schedule to balance time between work and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ts living standard, finance, convenience,etc…; nevertheless, people have to work lon...
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Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: FOR_ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for a long time'?
Suggestion: for a long time
... anymore because of working on computer for along time. Secondly, spending too much time for w...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...more because of working on computer for along time. Secondly, spending too much time for w...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: FOR_ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for a long time'?
Suggestion: for a long time
...et sick dramatically because of working for along time without taking rest before. In my case,...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...ick dramatically because of working for along time without taking rest before. In my case,...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...udying if I had a strenuous day before. furthermore, when people feel bored about what they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42352941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00153491427 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658823529412 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.4857555262 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226591047778 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914766272403 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447436452527 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140439716166 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205631586945 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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