Fashion trend are difficult to follow. Some people think that they primarily exist fust to sell clothes so we should not follow them. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Of late, due to the development of fashion industry in most countries, the demand, that dressing up trending clothes, is becoming more common. However, it is thought that fashion trend would never stop and people should wear what they feel comfortable and suitable situation. I somehow disagree with this statement because with some career, catching new trend is very important and my opinions is going to outlined below.
First of all, there are plenty of international fashion brands appear in most markets; moreover, the number of local brand in each country is uncounted. In addition, they compete each others by publishing new items every month or even day; so many people think that follow trend is impossible and waste money. Secondly, it would be better if people use ample amount of money from catching fashion to social purpose by helping others particularly orphans. Practically, following fashion is most popular in some Asian countries especially china because they want to show up their high level, instead, sending money to improve living standard through some social funds like people in modern countries (japan or northern Europe).
On the other hand, in some careers especially celebrities, dressing up fashion or new trend is necessary because they need it to appear perfectly in front of their fans to earn money as much as possible after that. Furthermore, fashion is a large industry because it brings many benefits which is accounted a high percentage GDP and also be the iconic of some countries such as America, France, England, Italy,etc…
In conclusion, even though following fashion is unnecessary with some people, it is still important in many situations. Therefore, each individually should know how to follow fashion trend suitably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28268551237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69243574735 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8479484081 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.5 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271940453493 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110730169352 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541308692942 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173276321953 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560464291796 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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