Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization's success. While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discusboth views and give your opinion.
In the able- bodied, a few individuals reckon that the companies encouragement is based on responsibilities of boss and head director. Instead, reveal that an abundance of noticeable features are pivotal of the limited success. I will discuss both views and give opinion in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the organization is reached on peak so it is possible either head director of companies provide motivation to employers. Although, the boss have higher position in occupation but, it is important to boost Co- operation skill in the workplace. Moreover, while director of department have a duty to selected skilled people to encourage level and brand of organoztion. The united state of America enforcement law on organization, the boss wage is an enormous rather than other employers so, it is good illustration show that director of companies take a massive burden to run business in the world.
Turning on flip side, most people vocalize that owner of companies is responsible to achieve fame and name to provide elegant aminties of products. If, they have higher good staff for manufacturing and delivered so it become successful and earn a largest chunk of money. Moving further, a Co- operation and kind hearted as well as modesty skilled job person are factors of organization levelled out to achieve success. A best epitome of this is a volkwagon limited earned higher income and sold mammoth product as compared other car industries because who has cater superior quality in the market.
To recapitulate, in my opinion the boss and employees are responsible to incline scale of organization in the world used to method like as motivation and mind technique as well as superior product to enhance success around the globe.
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- Some people say that should all subject taught to student in school . Other say that only one subject taught in which children learnt interesting . Discuss both views and relevant examples ? 56
- Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization's success. While other think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discusboth views and give your opinion. 61
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- During the advancement in computer technology the trend of working from home will bring a Dramatic change to people lives. It's positive or negative development. Give your opinion and example 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...died, a few individuals reckon that the companies encouragement is based on responsibilit...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...f for manufacturing and delivered so it become successful and earn a largest chunk of ...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ivered so it become successful and earn a largest chunk of money. Moving further,...
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Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: The
...ation levelled out to achieve success. A best epitome of this is a volkwagon lim...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'catered'.
Suggestion: catered
...ed other car industries because who has cater superior quality in the market. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15087719298 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98042035783 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8391900253 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163922372474 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055711136661 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339234371073 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099818205598 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243469628836 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.