Write a letter to invite your English-speaking friend to watch a new film with you about your country.2.27 - 2.47
In the letter, you should:
include some information about the film
explain why your friend might be interested to watch the film
inform other arrangements you will be making for watching the film
Dear Grace,
How are you doing? Since we have not met for a long time, I have got a perfect evening planned out for us. I remeber the last time we met, you conveyed to me about your fondness for bollywood movies and your eagerness to watch one.
Intrestingly, recently a new movie has been released which has your favourite actor Shahrukh Khan and the movie's name is Swadesh. The film shows some fascinating facts of India and also about the Indian culture. Additionally, it would also help you to write your thesis for the next assignment about India.
Furthermore, to make the evening more exciting, I will cook your favourite Indian curry and some Samosas with it. I am trying to organise an HD movie print for better picture quality.
Let's plan for this meeting on Saturday 21st August, as it is a long weekend and we could relax till late night. I hope you could make it.
Warm Regards,
Tina.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...e print for better picture quality. Lets plan for this meeting on Saturday 21st ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63580246914 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37590178934 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8736481361 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2727272727 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208803765039 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759231907257 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751260604411 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115502053814 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658256773566 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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