In many countries nowadays, people still live with their parents after marriage. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?
In recent years, while some youngsters have a tendency to relocate after marriage, many of them still decide to continue living under the same roof with their parents. Although this phenomenon has some advantages, I would say that the drawbacks are more significant.
On the one hand, sharing a house together with parents after getting married can be of great benefits. Firstly, the lifestyles of young people are becoming more and more hectic with limitless load of work and pressure, thereby having less time to take care of their children as well as their own houses. Having parents to share the amount of household chores or parenting would be such an extreme relief for the burden youngsters already have. Vice versa, it is probably the best for children and parents to stick together as most developing countries have poor social welfare systems and the old therein must depend on their kids to be looked after, especially in case of emergency. Finally, by living together, both parents and their children will save on such living expenses as rent, utility bills, renovations or shared grocery bills which significantly decreases financial pressures for both. Therefore, they will have the advantages to invest in other future plans.
Notwithstanding, the drawbacks of this trend are liable to outweigh the foregoing benefits. Firstly, owing to the generation gap, different points of view and quarrels are nearly unavoidable, for example, in terms of timelines and restrictions. Old people tend to go to bed earlier while youngsters tend to have a lively nightlife. Other complicated conflicts could arise between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, which are bound to seriously damage the marriage relationships of the young. Disagreements about types of child discipline also cause conflicts, as grandparents would likely to pamper their grandchildren, meanwhile parents have other modern practices of bringing up their kids. Living with parents also means less privacy and less freedom, which are vital to nurture a marriage relationship. Many parents tend to control over their children’s life as a habit since they were a child, meaning they have to always live by their parents’ norms and rules. Lastly, while people who move outside have to decide and handle everything from the smallest things such as housework to other serious problems such as financial status, people who live with their parents will be less concerned about many issues, which makes them becoming less independent in their mature life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, as well as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34437086093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77417052545 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8507569933 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28498949721 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818357490737 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650196671219 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172555590397 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276163274999 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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