Currently, people in many countries prefer to be with their parents even after marriage; this tendency have both positive and negative impacts, but the possible benefits will outweigh the potential risks as a whole.
First of all, parents are the one who gave birth, through out the period they suffered a lot to bring up us to the present state;hence we can't ignore them after getting a new partner. We always need the support and care from the family; that are essential to be successful in leading life. Moreover, we have the responsibility to protect and provide better living condition for parents; especially when they are old. Being family with us give a sense of togetherness and the life will be more joyfull; we can withstand the difficult situations with ease, when somebody is supporting us.
On the otherhand, people feels like lack of privacy, when they are together with family, so that they try to get separated. People who are living separate from family primarily forgetting their responsibility towards parents and often feels guilty. They will miss the warmth feeling of family life in some occasion and ofcourse they will feel bad in situations need some to support. Some people are thinking to stay with family is distracting and it will reduce the privacy and failing even to contact with family after marriage. If we are leaving our family for our personal comfort; for sure our children will do the same to us, it will be the worst experience in our life.
Overall, marriage is not a reason to get away from the family, live the life with most happily together with the family. Whatever we do in our life, we will get returned, so live properly in harmony with family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81164383562 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52538946496 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2050657113 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198951607858 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816139432491 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738550687489 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142802985888 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692953975787 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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