Some people believe that managers are responsible for the organization’s success, while others think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”
A section of society argue that the managers contribute significantly to the successful growth of an organization. However, there are others who believe that it is not only the managers, but other factors within the organization that lead to successful results. In my opinion, while I agree that managers are crucial, they are not the be all and end all. The overall culture of the organization amalgamated with other factors gives relatively better success.
First and foremost , the vision and culture of the organization play a crucial role in its success.A company with a very strong ethos attracts like-minded employees. A recent study reveals that the percentage of retention of workforce is relatively higher in organizations such as Google,Wipro and Amazon where the focus is on employees. For instance, workers need to be cared and valued for their skills.In addition to fair promotion policies and deserving pay, employees seek opportunities and chances for self-growth.This in turn, reflects on the organization’s success as they feel a sense of ownership and contribute more.
However, the role of a manager cannot be completely denied given the responsible position one is placed in. Successful managers possess the ability to delegate according to the skill sets of employess.This enbles them to contribute effectively, thereby increasing the chances of success.Furthermore,empathizing and empowering the team also has a role to play in successful organizations.On the contrary, some mangers lack commitment and they maybe partial towards their peers.Consequently, the climate of the organization is affected with petty politics thereby creating a disruption among workers.
To conclude,although managers contribute to the overall development of an organization,there are several other factors leading to the success of the organization
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69064748201 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83071799801 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.051066346 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.2 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303519248101 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113676557318 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401836945119 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17408665764 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364929733936 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.