Why can some people cannot balance their professional and personal life? Do you think it is important to balance these two lives?
Surely there has been no time in history which has changed the lives of people more dramatically. A quick reflection on a typical reveals the importance of balance between personal and professional life has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussions. people have always intrigued to analyse and explain about the effects on individual's personal life. Regarding this, I believe that it is mainly happening due to improper managing of time and it can be solved by adopting the mentioned in this essay.
there are several reasons for not getting managing time fore personal life. First of all, there is been great competition between different people to receive more progress as compared to that of their colleagues. they are behaving like crabs in a bucket, pulling out each others legs. Another reason is that, private jobs force individuals to work under certain conditions and criteria. so, they don't get enough time to provide for their families and personal works.
However, in my opinion, there are various steps we could take to tackle these problems. Companies should provide special time allowance to their workers, so that they can give time to their families and personal work. Also, individual should enjoy understand the importance of giving time to their families, as lacking in it, may arose to many relationship problems.
Hence based on the arguments above, I want to stress that relationship problems are arising mainly due to inappropriate contents or security loopholes. Nonetheless, we could certainly implement a range of measures mentioned in this essay to mitigate them in a timely manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24621212121 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77340766201 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6560759232 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190938908154 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601318486077 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055898106476 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102559638974 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746789628449 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.