scientist have been warning for many years about environmental protection and we must limit the use of energy in daily lives. what is the reason for this? How can people be encouraged to take interest towards environmental protection.
It is undeniable that environment protection is one of the most challenging issue in the world. As such, scientist have cautioned us about safeguarding the environment for decades, they propose that we must cut the amount of energy we use daily. This essay will offer the reason they adopted this proposal and put forward a tangible way to encourage people to take part in environmental safe keeping.
To begin with, energy in for of fossil fuels, such as petroleum, contribute massively to global warming and climate change. A fundamental reason for this is that petroleum contain carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases which are one of the main cause of greenhouse effect. For example, a recent report by the Department of environmental control showed that, carbon dioxide from fossil fuel combustion accounted for 80 percent of environmental problem like global warming and climate change. Thus, limiting the amount of fossil fuel energy we consume daily can help keep the environment safe.
Education and awareness can help to encourage people to take part in environmental safe keeping. People should be encouraged through books, papers, and television to reduce the use of energy by using eco-friendly devices. Let them be educated that the continue usage of high level of energy may lead to environmental problem like high-rise of sea level, extreme temperature and glacier melting which could be catastrophic to human race.
In conclusion, the reason why scientist want us the curb the way we use energy is to reduce the risk of environment problem like global warming a d safeguard the environment, education and awareness can help people know the risk involve if such phenomenon occurs, hence, encouraging them to help save the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ndly devices. Let them be educated that the continue usage of high level of energy may lead ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvolve if such phenomenon occurs, hence, encouraging them to help save the enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2296819788 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89209609202 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.610850354 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.545454545 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368401264854 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133342011383 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569292169804 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216382360739 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377631411589 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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