people in developed countries are buying more and more cars. Do the advantage for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment.
people in civilized countries are purchasing more and more vehicles. The moot question is, does the personal benefits of buying more cars outweigh the demerit for the ecosystem? In my opinion, i believe that the disadvantages of more automobile to the environment outweigh the individual benefits because we can loose our ecosystem to increase amount of pollution from these increased vehicles.
To begin with, one possible advantage of a owning a car, is that it provides transport convenience. People can travel to work and other various destination, without the inconvenience of using a shared transport. This allows them to travel whenever they want, without waiting on the bus or train for hours before departing. Thus, private vehicle brings punctuality. as people, can travel and arrive to their destinations on time through their personal cars compared to using a public transport.
However, increasing numbers of cars has brought a serious problem of cumulative green house effects to the environment. The increase of fuel consumption, and other pollution such as carbon dioxide from vehicles has resulted to risen cases of global warming. Consequently, resulting to melting of ice caps, which, increases the volume of river banks. This phenomenon may lead to lost of lands through flooding. In addition, these gasses and fumes from the increased number of automobile, can bring about climate changes, like heat wave, typhoon and cyclone which is detrimental to the ecosystem.
In conclusion, in comparison to any individual benefits. i believe that the disadvantages of cars on our environment which may lead to us loosing our ecosystem far outweigh any personal advantages that convenient transport might bring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: People
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, may, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43866171004 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97088128769 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0894536833 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2092983837 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661377242187 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091027984384 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126400439573 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128078386965 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.