Scientists have been warning from many years about environmental protection and we should limit the use of energy in daily lives. What are the reasons and solutions for that?
Some researchers feel that the public ought to reduce the use of energy in their day to day life, in order to save the environment. There seem to be a few reasons, and a number of solutions, which we would further discuss in this essay.
Possibly the main reason is the increase of use of oil (petrol) in the world. The ever-rising use of vehicles needs petrol, which leads to high levels of exhausted fuels in the air. Consequently, the key factor contributed to the global warning. A further well-known cause is over excess usage of Electricity for example, so many things such as lightnings, home appliances, to charge our mobile phones and other devices, etc. need charging. The harmful effects come in when generating power. The more electricity produced, the more carbon dioxide will be released as well, which will just sit in the air and can lead to global warming.
To counteract to these dangers, perhaps the most effective and most immediate solution would be for the governments to encourage individuals to use public transport. By doing this, they would not purchase cars. As a result, we could decrease the use of oil. Another remedy could be to promote the use of renewable energy to heat accommodation such as solar system or wind energy. Developed countries, for example, Portland a city in the USA is already a well-established solar leader, and the city’s supportive policies as well as active community support make it a hotbed for continued solar potential
To encapsulate, petrol and coal seem to be the main sources of energy responsible for damaging the environment. The key solutions would be the decrease of using vehicles and the use of renewable energy from the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84365460768 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5844196513 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171026557149 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524830515747 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049714218375 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112768994816 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050438115908 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.