Scientists have been warning from many years about environmental protection and we should limit the use of energy in daily lives. What are the reasons for that? How to encourage people to take an interest towards environment protection?
Scientists, all around the globe have been stressing to limit the consumption of energy in our day to day lives. This is because people are consuming more than mother earth can reproduce and this increased use of energy is also contributing towards global warming. Therefore, people should be educated to preserve the environment, which could be done by encouraging people to use recyclable products as well as by imposing taxes on excessive fuel consumption.
Due to the increase in purchasing power, people are using energy more than ever before. The consumption of energy is even more than reproduction capacity of our planet., which can lead to the scarcity of both renewable and non-renewable resources for our future generations. In addition, this increased use of energy is also contributing towards global warming and various environmental hazards due to the excessive emission of greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide. Cyclones, tsunamis, floods and debris are on their rise with their devastating effects.
Therefore, there is a dire need to motivate people to protect our environment and make earth a livable place for future generations. This can be done by educating people to use recyclable products. Moreover, governments should consider imposing taxes on fuel consumption for private cars. This is because, such an action it will encourage people to use public transport which will eventually reduce fuel consumption to some extent.
All I all, I believe experts are concerned on limiting the use of energy because of the excessive emission of greenhouse gases and limited production capacity of our planet. Educating people to use recyclable products and imposing taxes on fuel consumption are some steps that can be taken to preserve the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96668577537 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5061081583 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217160176838 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809324641451 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352733177944 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142480569775 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404025443765 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.