Scientists have been warning from many years about environmental protection and we should limit the use of energy in daily lives. What are the reasons for that? How to encourage people to take an interest towards environment protection?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 22.5pt; text-align: justify; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Scientists, all around the globe have been stressing to limit
the consumption of energy in our day to day lives. This is because people are
consuming more than mother earth can reproduce and this increased use of energy
is also contributing towards global warming. Therefore, people should be educated
to preserve the environment, which could be done by motivating people to use
recyclable products as well as by imposing taxes on excessive fuel consumption.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 22.5pt; text-align: justify; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Due to the increase in purchasing power, people are using
energy more than ever before. The consumption of energy is even more than reproduction
capacity of our planet., which can lead to the scarcity of both renewable and
non-renewable resources for our future generations. In addition, this increased
use of energy is also contributing towards global warming and various environmental
hazards due to the excessive emission of greenhouse gases such as, carbon
dioxide. Cyclones, hurricanes, tsunamis, floods and debris are on their rise, for
example, hurricane Katrina in United States, with its devastating effects. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 22.5pt; text-align: justify; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">There is a dire need to motivate people to protect our environment
and make earth a livable place for future generations. This can be done by educating
people to use recyclable products and banning the use of plastic. For example,
in New Zealand many super markets have already abandoned plastic bags. Moreover,
governments should consider imposing taxes on fuel consumption for private
cars. This is because, such an action will encourage people to use public transport,
which will eventually lead to the reduction of fuel consumption.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin-bottom: 22.5pt; text-align: justify; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">All I all, I believe experts are concerned on limiting the
use of energy because of the excessive emission of greenhouse gases and limited
production capacity of our planet. Educating people to use recyclable products
and imposing taxes on fuel consumption are some steps that could be taken to
preserve the environment. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4007.0 1615.20841683 248% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.41806722689 5.12529762239 164% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.1068631723 2.80592935109 218% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.382352941176 0.561755894193 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1099.8 506.74238477 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 331.305529937 49.4020404114 671% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.916666667 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569007815153 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531525908674 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264959994217 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04868175539 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450864648853 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 13.0946893788 291% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.33 50.2224549098 -54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 11.3001002004 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 32.15 12.4159519038 259% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 9.78957915832 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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