Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
· advise them of your situation
· explain how this is affecting you
· request a new card
<div style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 12pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, Helvetica, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: black; white-space: normal;"><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">Dear Sir,</span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">I am writing this letter to inform you that I lost my wallet couple of days back, which had my student ID in it and I would like to request a replacement for it.</span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);"></span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">This was lost somewhere in cafeteria<b style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;"> for which</b> I looked around and asked some people but had no luck. <b style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased;">Therefore, I made</b> a formal police complaint on same day as the wallet also contained my driver license and credit cards. Due to this, I do not have my student ID with me, and I am unable to use the university facilities. As a result, my studies are being compromised. I went to administration department to order my replacement, but they refused to accept my application as I did not have any proof of identity with me.</span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">I would therefore like to receive a replacement for my student ID card immediately in order to utilize university facilities effectively.</span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);"></span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">I look forward to hearing back from you.</span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);"></span></p><p style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; margin-bottom: 0px;"><span style="-webkit-font-smoothing: antialiased; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-style: inherit; font-variant: inherit; font-weight: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 11pt; line-height: inherit; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(32, 31, 30);">Yours sincerely.</span></p></div>
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- Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter· advise them of your situation· explain how this is affecting you· request a new card 11
- Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter· advise them of your situation· explain how this is affecting you· request a new card 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 1, column 797, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...ne; color: rgb32, 31, 30;'>Dear Sir,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5022.0 937.175257732 536% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 546.0 206.0 265% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.1978021978 4.54256449028 202% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 3.78020617076 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.81178645658 2.54303337028 268% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.265567765568 0.622605031667 43% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1224.9 290.88556701 421% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 136.0 16.3608247423 831% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 1318.69803215 44.8134815571 2943% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1255.5 76.5299724578 1641% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 136.5 16.8248392259 811% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.75 4.34317383033 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0208058686393 0.216113520407 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237073440807 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0220913746544 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0208058686393 0.12726935374 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 90.2 8.37731958763 1077% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -117.32 70.7449484536 -166% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 31.1 3.82989690722 812% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 63.4 7.45979381443 850% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 37.26 8.71597938144 427% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.49 7.59969072165 164% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 74.0 8.62886597938 858% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 56.4 8.54432989691 660% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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