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... development of society is affect people ,i think nowaday young people are more in...
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...evelopment of society is affect people ,i think nowaday young people are more ind...
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...enpent to make decsions by themselves. First ,the technologic is develops so it...
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...to make decsions by themselves. First ,the technologic is develops so it is eas...
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...ps so it is easy to get the information.For example ,when young people graduate fro...
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...ts about which companies they want to go ,at the same time they could find some u...
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...panies they want to go ,at the same time they could find some useful informention...
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...about the campanies such as the location,the emviroments of working ,the salary and ...
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...roments of working ,the salary and so on ,which could help they found the fitest c...
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...p they found the fitest company for them .By contrast ,in the pass years ago yong ...
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...they found the fitest company for them .By contrast ,in the pass years ago yong pe...
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...er parents which job was better for them,because there were lack the channel to find hel...
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...the channel to find helpful infromention ,so they had to get help from parents . ...
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...on ,so they had to get help from parents . Second ,with the expolse of populati...
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...f population there are firce compitition,so parents have to devote them into the jo...
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...parents have to devote them into the job,which aviod lose job .Therefore many young pe...
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...e them into the job,which aviod lose job .Therefore many young people have to lear...
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...them into the job,which aviod lose job .Therefore many young people have to learn take ca...
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...them into the job,which aviod lose job .Therefore many young people have to learn take ca...
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...erefore many young people have to learn take care of themselves eariler.For example ...
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...o learn take care of themselves eariler.For example ,when i was in the primary scho...
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...xample ,when i was in the primary school ,after school i had to take the bus went ...
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...was in the primary school ,after school i had to take the bus went to home evertd...
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...ad to take the bus went to home evertday ,because my parents were busy with them j...
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... their companies were far away my school ,if they pick me up went to home it would...
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...y pick me up went to home it would take many time .However ,in the past parents had enoug...
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... up went to home it would take many time .However ,in the past parents had enough ...
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...d enough time totake care their children ,because there were not firce compitition...
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...because there were not firce compitition ,which offer the condition for children t...
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...on for children to rely on thier parents . Third ,nowadays there are servies ma...
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...or children to rely on thier parents . Third ,nowadays there are servies many c...
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...dren to rely on thier parents . Third ,nowadays there are servies many changes ...
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...es for yonug people to make mony to live .At the meanwhile yong people have learn ...
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... for yonug people to make mony to live .At the meanwhile yong people have learn so...
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...live .At the meanwhile yong people have learn some living skills from their education...
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...g skills from their education in advance ,which help them adaption the society qui...
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...h help them adaption the society quickly .For example my university once organize ...
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...help them adaption the society quickly .For example my university once organize the...
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...university once organize the students to join the activisity in the supermarkt wh...
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... of master good skills of communications .But in the past ,there were not such cha...
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...f master good skills of communications .But in the past ,there were not such change...
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...kills of communications .But in the past ,there were not such change for young peo...
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...re were not such change for young people . All in all ,i think nowadays yong pe...
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...ere not such change for young people . All in all ,i think nowadays yong people...
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... change for young people . All in all ,i think nowadays yong people are more in...
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...hange for young people . All in all ,i think nowadays yong people are more ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, while, for example, i think, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85250737463 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49358981206 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.1344086022 333% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.10282307 48.9658058833 488% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 329.0 100.406767564 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.8 20.6045352989 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 5.45110844103 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 55.0 5.5376344086 993% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174236477769 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122554456237 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497839608419 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122554456237 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497839608419 0.0645574589148 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 11.7677419355 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 10.1575268817 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.0537634409 286% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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