Young adults often have to decide whether to live independently or still living with their families for a longer time. First of all, there is no “correct answer” because independence depends on both internal and external factors such as maturity, education, relationships, culture and finances surrounding young adults life.
Families should prepare children for the time when they need to be independent, but the reality is that parents often think that making their lives easier will bring them more happiness. So, when a teenager grows up without a sense of responsibility and maturity, being independent can be really difficult and unsustainable.
Either way, there are inherent advantages related to independent life and that’s the reason why most young adults wish to achieve this self-sustained status. Frequently, independence is a synonym of freedom. They won’t have to follow rules set by parents related to schedule, money, relationships or night outings. They won’t give explanations on their behavior or clothing as well, which could be seen as a superficial or spoiled criteria, but are the main reasons behind independence wishes of teenagers.
However, living independently also means that young adults will have to be responsible for their acts, time and money, they will have to find a job and support themselves. Also, they will need to acquire or improve skills related to housework and financial administration, which is also tedious and surprisingly hard to those young adults that usually lived without responsibilities at their houses.
As an example I can illustrate my experience. I graduated last year and I started to live alone. Immediately, a lot of duties and housework fall on my shoulders. I had to look for rent, plan my economy and restrict my schedule so I could go to work every day.
So, every person should judge if they are ready to cover their needs without depend on their parents or if they need more time to learn to be self-sufficient. When it comes to this point, one would definitely want to know their parents thinking and experience. Parents guidance and advising through this process can make a big difference.
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 90
- Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
... culture and finances surrounding young adults life. Families should prepare child...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s on their behavior or clothing as well, which could be seen as a superficial or ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ut responsibilities at their houses. As an example I can illustrate my experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, still, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27065527066 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09901848214 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1397314554 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.823529412 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31577259171 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972978385011 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100735084937 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16094079564 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881742251339 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.