In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.Some people think that the government should have the responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In several nations , the number of people who have young age...
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...e are turning out to be obese and ailing . While I agree that the authorities have...
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...rities have a duty to have the liability , I believe each citizens need to control...
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...ach citizens need to control their vigor . On the one hand , I would agree t...
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...izens need to control their vigor . On the one hand , I would agree that man...
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...trol their vigor . On the one hand , I would agree that management should ex...
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...ould exhibit the responsibility. Firstly , if the government often organises more ...
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...cation for dwellers, teenager will have a amount of knowledge to know the effects...
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...ledge to know the effects of weight gain . Secondly , the government should be the...
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...ow the effects of weight gain . Secondly , the government should be the one to per...
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...onal sports play for children and adults . So I doubt the government has any furth...
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... government has any further role to play . On the other hand , although the ...
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...nment has any further role to play . On the other hand , although the liabili...
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...r role to play . On the other hand , although the liability have the respons...
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...gh the liability have the responsibility , teenager who do not want to lose - weig...
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...do not want to lose - weight are useless . Everyone needs to be motivated to contr...
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...vated to control their weight and health . And parents are the only ones who can e...
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...o more physical tasks or exercises. In conclusion, the government should com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06077348066 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87467289847 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60773480663 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2274723389 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180796967769 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661138200434 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401139539121 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101119721142 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335417403018 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.