The charts below give Information about travel to and from the UK, a nd about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
The given bar graph illustrates the information about uk residents who visited various countries in1999.
Overall,it can be clearly noticed that the france was more preferred country by United Kingdom natives conversely, l east visitors visit in turkey.
In 1999UK residents more visited in france and the number of visitors were around 11 million which was highest as compared to others .Spain was second followed country with roughly 9 million people by uk visitors. Approximately 4 million uk tourisers were visited in USA.
Probing further, the little difference is witnessed in Greece and turkey which were preffered by British citizens for travelling,which was around 3 million and 2 million visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 110.0 196.424390244 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60909090909 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90233590734 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2173885656 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207226211235 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132335252034 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107232752613 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138242639975 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119415453634 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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