The Monarchy Of England
In this set of materials, the writer and the lecturer are discussing the impacts of The United Kingdom Monarchy history. They are largely discordant with each other while the writer argues that it has several benefits others maintain that it poses some drawbacks. The United Kingdom Monarchy has no politic power in the council, and it represents very limited people of The Britain. The last reason, The Monarchy is not adapt modern era cultural structure. The lecturer invalidates the writer’s assertions; in all aspects and demonstrates that monarchy should do some reform in the royal family. The details of the speaker’s refutation are revealed in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, The United Kingdom Monarchy looks like unique for decades. In the past it has power over the world and public. But, in the 21. Century, it has no control of the Britain Council. Moreover, Queen only offers some advice to president of England that İt has not consitutional right over the parliament. İt has limited constitutional represent.
Secondly, Many of people think that British people love Queen with loyalty bond. But Monarchy is symbolic of restricted religious people in Britain. Britain has 65 millions population roughly while there is only one million people believe the queen and royal family. Royal family can not symbolize big part of the community of Britain.
Lastly, in the modern era, The world has undergone deep converting aspects of many sides. Especially, cultural structure is mixed today world. But Royal Family is compose of irish, Scottish, English and Walish that is very limited part of The Britain. Other side Canada and Australia dynasty have multi-cultural family structure. England is taken shape lots of country people, although The Royal family continuing restricted cultural marriage. In deed, it is not adapted to modern era thinking world that it lives to continue in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'adapted'.
Suggestion: adapted
...n. The last reason, The Monarchy is not adapt modern era cultural structure. The lect...
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Line 1, column 458, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot adapt modern era cultural structure. The lecturer invalidates the writer's ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld do some reform in the royal family. The details of the speaker's refutatio...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ural structure is mixed today world. But Royal Family is compose of irish, Scotti...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'composed'.
Suggestion: composed
...mixed today world. But Royal Family is compose of irish, Scottish, English and Walish ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32247557003 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74393960464 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 419.366225166 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.246387985 49.2860985944 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9545454545 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.27373068433 281% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196336563125 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483264148576 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651204469325 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108387600951 0.162205337803 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603606226247 0.0443174109184 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 63.6247240618 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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