Movies are becoming indispensable part of everyone's life. Mostly individuals like to spend their leissure time on watching movies. I will discuss the reasons and problems of this statement.
The demand of movies are increasingly day by day because of certain reasons. To begin with, the movies are less costly and easily accessable. They need not to go anywhere. The individuals enjoy the new or old movies according to their own taste with the help of fast speed internet. For exemplify, cracle is presented by Sony can be designated as the free version of Netflix. It allows users to watch movies, T.v serials, all for free.
Moreover, the movies are a good source of entertainment. They can take a relief from a stress by watching movies. In addition, the movies provides information about the culture and language of different region. Consequently, they become educate, inspire and motivate from these movies. Furthermore, the individuals do not like to make close relationship with another individuals in the era of modernisation. Human beings like to live alone. So, that's why the movies are the best way to spend free time.
On the other hand, if movies have pros than the cons of movies can not be neglected. There are some problems created by movies. The first and foremost is that the children become habitual of these movies. They are not wasting their time but also weak in study. Additionally, the more impact is upon eyes and body. The more curiosty of movies is enhancing the problem of obesity. Secondly, the individuals demand new mobile phones from their parents because the technology provides new movies on andriod phones. The children pressurize their parents to buy these phones.
In conclusion, watching movies in a leisure time is not a good thing. So, both parents and teachers should encourage the children to take participate in sports activities which is very useful for physically fit and make their bright future.
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I am writing need not to go
I am writing need not to go anywhere already in the task and also that's why in the task.
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
1. the sentences are relatively short
2. the beginning of most sentences is either 'they' or 'the'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1577 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.867 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.632 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.684 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.283 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.459 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...ly and easily accessable. They need not to go anywhere. The individuals enjoy the new...
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Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...n. Human beings like to live alone. So, thats why the movies are the best way to spen...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05572755418 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73492921677 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7672114722 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8076923077 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4230769231 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.42307692308 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262189172385 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711070457649 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810604169151 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153560896943 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047318398436 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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