More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or bad thing?
While people spend their leisure time, these days, doing different activities, some prefer to spend their free time seeing movies. Since elimination of stress, which is caused by hectic work or study schedule, and rehabilitation are essential in order to be mentally healthy, so some people indulge in watching movies. This essay will discuss key reasons for it. In my opinion, its benefits outweigh the drawbacks; therefore, it is a positive activity.
Dismissal of strain and restoration are crucial after a long working day. It is medically evident that a large proportion of population who are frequently involved in some sort of tough working routine is often affected from anxiety and trauma; this could to severe health mental and physical health issues. Getting involved in viewing movies is a feasible option as it could relieve stress and strain; so most people adopt this as a pastime task. A recent survey conducted by Oxford University concluded that indulgence in watching TV shows has lowered huge levels of anxiety in a large number of people.
Despite the advantages it has, it might have certain disadvantages. Excessive involvement in watching TV will result in the waste of valuable time. Students could become the victim and may spend most of their time at home viewing pictures. This could, however, be a constructive habit because of the fact that acquisition of knowledge is possible. That is to say that, some movies, which are based on technology, culture and history, are educational and they provide valuable information that is beneficial for learners. Times, which is a popular magazine in USA, recently reported that education films is accountable to impart knowledge among people of different age groups.
To sum up, watching films is a pastime for some; yet it may have certain cons. However, its pros outweighs its cons because it rehabilitates and relieves stress. Thus, it can be regarded as a helpful activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...could, however, be a constructive habit because of the fact that acquisition of knowledge is possible. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, sort of, in my opinion, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17981072555 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77048845608 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608832807571 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6470588235 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194111343908 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535318215099 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708434813943 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113799159069 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846152406569 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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