Over the past few years, researching outer space is always the center point of controversial disputation all over the world. Space exploration and experiments in this field involved a myriad of wealth, mainly comes from taxpayers. There are benefits as well as drawbacks associated with space missions.
When it comes to exposing the universe, conspicuously, it makes a significant contribution in finding the possible and alternative terrestrial planet for mankind in the future. By the virtue of the natural resources on the Earth are limited and being debilitated in the last decades. Launching satellite systems into the cosmos enable human to gain irreplaceable and priceless information about climate changes, also how many raw materials humans have left. As a result, the effective subservience of satellites, natural disasters can be predicted and alleviated the damaged proportion of destruction in the lowest ratio by people. However, the maintained charge cost an extravagant of cutting-edge satellites.
In comparison with the prospect of exploring the galaxy, simultaneously, there are also some downsides to exploring and finding out more about the universe. One evident drawback is that it endangers the lives of astronauts related to many accidents happened in the past. For example, the Challenger space shuttle exploded within minutes of its launch. Moreover, if space missions fail, a thousand billion dollars are required to build space fleets and shuttles will be evaporated. Instead of space investment, this great amount of money could have been used to reduce the sufferings of humans on earth. Affirmatively, the more living standard ameliorate the conditions, the more Earth planet would be a much better place to live in.
To conclude, space research certainly enhances us to learn more about the universe in order to worth spending money. Besides, the exorbitant of money on space research is not a worthy endeavor due to space missions have a higher risk of failure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
...agant of cutting-edge satellites. In comparison with the prospect of exploring the gala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42628205128 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01389608461 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63141025641 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9412913601 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252984803687 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737815508782 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690753570423 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150549341776 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822459648105 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.