You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In the near future, many countries all over the world will be faced with significant problems not only pertaining to the environment, but also rising population and education system. In the next ten years, India too will be posed with the same problems in addition to increase in traffic and housing problems. In this essay we shall discuss the problems as well as the solutions to them.
Firstly, India has the second most populated country in world for a long time. As a result, this has been the root cause of a number issues we are facing today. Growing population leads to cutting down of more forest ares to provide space for housing and other basic facilities. Secondly, the economy of India is rising and the standard of living has also improved. For instance, around 1990 to 2000 only the rich and upper middle class had a car. Most of the common people used public transport for their commute. However, since now cheap cars available, it opens a whole new market where more people can afford it thus leading to congestion on the streets. Thirdly, many children, especially girls in rural India do not receive basic education. They are forced to leave school and get married once they attain puberty.
These issues can be solved if they are tackled one problem at a time. Mainly, the population needs to be controlled. Furthermore, it is not enough to just provide birth control measures, people must also be educated about their use and effect. Many people are unaware. Also, purchase of private vehicle should be restricted. For example, in Singapore buying a car is very expensive due to the high tax and high cost of maintenance. In addition, they have made the public transport very efficient. Thus, encouraging more people to use them. If we follow this practice we too might be able to curb the traffic problems.Lastly , the education system is needs to get digitalized. The government, must provide some incentives to family who educate their children. Seminars and talks should be conducted regarding child marriage.
In conclusion, the whole world will be facing with these challenges and steps to overcome them must be undertaken now. Therefore, if we do not take the necessary measures now they will go on to become bigger problems in the next ten years. As they saying goes - "the seeds you sow today will reap a better tomorrow"
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...crease in traffic and housing problems. In this essay we shall discuss the problem...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion, they have made the public transport very efficient. Thus, encouraging more p...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s, encouraging more people to use them. If we follow this practice we too might be...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Lastly
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...able to curb the traffic problems.Lastly , the education system is needs to get di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89303482587 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62062557682 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8483612818 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6538461538 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11538461538 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279576402958 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063733445625 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728616511715 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185427472552 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983039508035 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.