The İmmigration history and progress in the America. Summarize the points made in the talk you just heard, explaining how they contrasted with points made in the reading.
In this set of materials, the author and professor are discussing the effects of immigration history during last century. They are largely discordant with each other while the author argues that historical progress both of the American immigration offers several benefits other support that it poses some problem in the American community structure which are related with the culture, tradition, and economic system. The professor invalidates the author’s assertions in all aspects and demonstrates that immigration should include serious regulation. The details of the professor’s refutation are revealed in the following paragraphs respectively.
Firstly, when it begins the immigration to America from the different part of world, some American people begins to feel, their culture is under the threaten. But they come America form many of reasons, also American cultural life will be affected during immigration progress.
Secondly, the immigrants come from Africa and Asia that they are exposed strictly discrimination in the American community who is presented minor group. The federal government does some regulations fort hem which aims to converting their to public. Although it seems to good for us, the government should be carefull about it.
Thirdly, The immigrants have some reasons come America. They have dreams in the new country in order to find job, family. Also they have some political, economical and religious reasons that lead to discomfort in the community. The federal government should be analyze aspects with whole ways.
To sum up, American people have several negative feelings about immigrants, but they do not purpose directly to immigrants. They feel under pressure face to new Latins, Africans or Asians. As a result of, The federal government must behave carefull and equal among the americans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 281.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59786476868 5.08290768461 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87084301085 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 419.366225166 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.8373404968 49.2860985944 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3125 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06452816374 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578510488433 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224912706511 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485754152195 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374210449995 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505465111195 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.2367328918 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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