the diagram shows the reason people in vietnam move to other country.
The flowchart illustrates the various steps of reasons why Vietnamese move to the America.The whole cause was due to the Vietnam’s war.
First of all, when the war in Vietnam occurred, the city has become disorganized anymore. It was crowded, unpleasant place for living, and a lot of issue happened. At the same time, the level of criminal act rapidly rose. Then, the village actually damaged and also there was no hope for safety living there. Certainly, it created an awful situation and if they continued to live in that country, they might be endanger.
Finally, Vietnamese took a solution that they have to move to other countries if they want to survive. However, the country actually has different languages as theirs where they liked to move. As a consequence, they need to learn that language. Vietnamese have chosen America where they favored to move. The America national language is English and they have to learn this language.
In short, When english language learning is completed, the Vietnamese could move to the America.
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Sentence: The America national language is English and they have to learn this language.
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why Vietnamese move to the America.
why Vietnameses move to America.
It was crowded, unpleasant place for living
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