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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television.
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- Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television. 70
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relationship among family will broke
relationship among family will break
Sentence: Then, television brings negative effect for family life because it derives people to the assumptions that relatives are not necessary since they can get everything from television, for instance, when they are bored they can watch entertainment program which are showed in television rather than meet to other families for conducting discussion.
Description: The fragment entertainment program which is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: In result, they relationship among family become closer.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and relationship
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 378 350
No. of Characters: 1893 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.409 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.008 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.609 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.991 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5