Radio and Television audiences in UK, October - December 1992
The line graph show changes in the percentages of T.V watchers and radio listeners in the U.K during 24 hours from October to December, 1992.
Overall, U.K. people listened to the radio in the morning and watched T.V in the evening.
At 6 a.m., while about 8% of U.K. population listened to the radio, nobody watched TV. The percentage of radio listeners then shoot up to a peak of around 28% during the next two hours before declining gradually to 2% at 4 a.m. on the following day. T.V and radio received the same number of audiences at around 3 a.m. From then onwards, the figure for radio started to slowly climb to around 3% at 5 a.m.
The percentage of T.V audiences, however, irregularly increased to 15% at 2 p.m, when it was equal to that of radio listeners. The percentage of T.V viewers the soared to a peak of nearly 50% at 8 p.m and remained stable during the next 2 hours before plunging to only 3% at 2 a.m. on the next day. After that, the figure marginally increased, exceeding that for radio
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to 2% at 4 a.m. on the following day. T.V and radio received the same number of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44623655914 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51994586893 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0231053183 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162079127643 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817712391487 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529567599731 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108227132542 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454990520901 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.