Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs.
How true is this statement. What influence people when they buy food.
These days, there are more and more options for food products. Each person have their own criteria to select food depending on their circumstances.
To begin with, price seems the top priority when people buy food. Especially, student or low-paid workers, they tend to buy food that they can afford it. In addition, some people economize on spending, therefore, they consider carefully the price of food products before buying them.
Besides the price, there are also a lots of other factors affecting choices. obviously, some people prefer to buy food that convenient and take a little time to prepare. For example, busy people who do not have much time to cook they will choose instant foods such as breads, instant noodle or frozen food. Meanwhile, other consumers prefer fresh food which is used one day.
Furthermore, a lots of people who are very precise. they care much about the origin as well as food quality. They have knowledge about how food affect their health, so they willing to pay more money, as long as they can buy the high quality food products. A case in point: organic food have the higher price than the others, but a lots of people prefer to buy it as they know that those products are good for their health.
After presenting all the facts, we have arrived at a conclusion that although price is the first consideration when buying food, other factors also affect choices of consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...ots of other factors affecting choices. obviously, some people prefer to buy food that co...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... which is used one day. Furthermore, a lots of people who are very precise. they ca...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... a lots of people who are very precise. they care much about the origin as well as f...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...e the higher price than the others, but a lots of people prefer to buy it as they know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85596707819 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35902635309 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0065325806 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390527137127 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142843290919 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853843080743 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210009387175 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11487190761 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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