The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph gives information the population between India and China. It is a prediction of citizens both countries ranging from 2000 to 2050.
In 2000, China had more dense population than India. There were more than 1.2 billion inhabitants who live in China, while India’s population was about 1 billion. Between 2000 and 2010, the number of Indian populations has increased approximately 0.2 billion. China’s citizens has risen just under 1.4 billion.
It can be seen from the graph that in 2020 both countries are getting a slight rise. While they will peak at the same numbers of citizens ...
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