“Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”
In many countries, gun ownership is strictly controlled. While some people claim that using the weapon is a way to make them safer, others believe the gun is one of the main factors that lead to violent communities with high rates of crime and I completely agree with this idea for some reasons.
To begin with, the number of violent crimes has increased until gun is allowed to carry. people use gun for purposes such as stealing, killing, threatening. As a result, they are able to put others’ life in risk rather than ensuring safety. For instance, the us where allows using gun, experiencing over 18,000 gun-related injury in the year 2014. Furthermore, suicide rates have been shown to rise in places where guns are legal. Thus, it is easier for people to commit crimes and kill themselves when letting them carry guns.
Thirdly, a recent study indicates that owning guns can affect people’s behaviors that they may easily commit crimes. threatening instead of reconciling is a way most gun owners choose when facing with problems especially children. For example, I have recently read news that a Chinese boy angrily killed his friend by his father’s air gun just because of a very small inconsistency. Therefore, weapon ownership causes enormous violence in societies.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that when people can gain access to guns, they are likely to pursue criminal activities and societies may suffer from violence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ncreased until gun is allowed to carry. people use gun for purposes such as stealing, ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Threatening
...ors that they may easily commit crimes. threatening instead of reconciling is a way most gu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11522633745 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72604470825 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2617998157 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178056762872 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633750762869 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038975017033 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933946477251 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649356410953 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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