Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while other feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.
Most people believe that sport should be compulsory for school children. however, others are opposing it. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will consider now.
one the one hand, those who support the idea that sport is an essential part of children’s school life see that it has major benefits for children’s physical development. For instance, the sport could make children relax after they spent some time for studying. Furthermore, the proponent of school sport emphasizes the importance of team building in the sport such as football or hockey, which is often felt to be excellent preparation for adulthood. Finally, many people feel that a competitive spirit, so important today is fostered by sports at an early age. it is evident that many successful business people excelled in the sport at school.
On the other hand, the proponent of this view feel that school sport uses up children’s time, and it should be better spent on academic subjects such as exam preparation. In addition, those who decline the idea see that it is unwise to force children to do activities that they have no interest in. after all, some youngsters are just not sporty and should be allowed to study instead. however, opponents of this idea are able to cite evidence of the controversy in the sports department, such as drugging and corruption scandals. they believe that this lack of morals conduct sets a poor example to young people.
Overall, it seems to me that sport should be not compulsory for school children because of the negative effect on their time outweighs the positive. this is as long as children are given a wide range to choose from, to ensure their interest is high, and that the sports industry itself maintains the highest standards of conduct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, so, after all, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96989966555 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71638623039 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7783772572 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359857727254 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119898628128 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847394610852 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223052795462 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692836232974 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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