Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of small shops will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Home is essential for every human being and they want to build their houses with modern amenities. However, with continuous increase in population, the demand for building new houses and buildings are also increasing. Now the question here is who should be responsible for safety standards while building homes? Some people believe that government is responsible whereas others think that everyone should follow safety ethics. This essay will discuss both points of view.
To begin with, government should set safety codes and measures which must be made mandatory to follow while building homes. In addition, we must take idea from Western countries infrastructure. For an instance how they are building skyscrapers without compromising on safety standards and quality. Same set of safety guidelines must be spread all across the India. also special attention must be taken while building houses in calamities prone areas such as Bhopal which is frequently hit by earthquakes or areas in Kerala which are hit by floods almost every year.
Apart from government, other people such as builders, owners and even labours must be held responsible for safety measures. owners must not hesitate to spend extra bucks in building quality houses and builders on the the other hand must not break the owner's trust, instead they must deliver what they promise. Furthermore, labours must adhere to all the safety guidelines what government has set for them as one's life is more precious than anything in this world.
Thus, Recapulating the above essay it is not only government but every citizen who build their homes must be aware of the safety codes and must follow them with due diligence due to their own safety.
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- Safety standards are important when building people’s homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes -the government or the people who build homes ? 61
- Safety standards are important when building people's homes. Who should be responsible for enforcing strict building codes - the government or the people who build the homes? 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 367, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...s must be spread all across the India. also special attention must be taken while b...
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Line 6, column 367, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...s must be spread all across the India. also special attention must be taken while b...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Owners
...e held responsible for safety measures. owners must not hesitate to spend extra bucks ...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...building quality houses and builders on the the other hand must not break the owners tr...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...building quality houses and builders on the the other hand must not break the owners tr...
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Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nes what government has set for them as ones life is more precious than anything in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, apart from, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23826714801 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53796005715 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9067681466 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.642857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0347747686238 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159047333802 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271282515492 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258825584908 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167889271249 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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