The past decade was incredible due to mammoth inventions in the area of medicine, transportations and information technologies. We have witnessed some amazing discoveries in the field of antibiotics, the airplane and computers, amount all these innovations and inventions, I believe, inventions of computers is game-changing and almost touched whole civilization.
To begin with, there are paramount advantages of computerization. First, it has impacted both societies and economic activities. We can hardly imagine life without computers. Computers with the help of software have made human life easy due to its ability to multitask, higher storage capacity and quick search feature. For example, digital transformation has impacted almost all areas, be it social networking, banking, hospitality, travel, manufacturing and many more. Moreover, recent developments in the area of artificial intelligence and machine learning have given massive momentum to automation, which as replaced mundane tasks with robotics.
On the other hand, there are negligible detrimental effects of over computer usage. In many cases, it has led to the issues of unemployment. Furthermore, people tend to become more lazy and sedentary. For example, sitting long hours on computer systems causes severe physical and psychological problems and epidemics.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that the benefits of computer systems outweigh the advantages of the airplane and medicine as their research and development are largely depended and influenced by computers.
- Some people think law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree? 85
- Student travel to study is overrated, we have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really required for higher studies? 80
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this? 72
- There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education Einstein Discuss this quote 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...icial intelligence and machine learning have given massive momentum to automation, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in many cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89082969432 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2892967809 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.6968851562 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104170695821 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307137713343 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380835775107 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059124184877 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507504023368 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 53.1260098522 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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