The bar graph illustrates the rates of males and females in Australia of various ages, who were doing daily exercise during the year 2010.
52.8% young men, those aged from 15 to 24 were involved in routine physical activity, whereas, the figures of women were 47.7%. But men of age group 25 to 34 did less physical activity than younger men and their percentage was 42.2%, on the contrary, the rates for women were more in this age and were 48.9%. Continuing this trend, the adult males of age between 35 to 44 were 39.5% and 52.5% for females.
Paradoxically, the figures showed increase in the rates of men from 45 to 54, although, the rates for women of this age gradually rose and was 53.3%. Subsequently, 45.1% males of age group 55 to 64 were performing daily ecxercises but the percentage of females of this age fall to 53%. Men of older age, from 65 and above did physical activity more than those aged 55 to 64, the figures were 46.7% and for women were 47.1%.
Overall, in Australia females of age group fourty-five to fifty-four were doing more exercise as compared to all other. On the other hand, younger men were involved in large percentage in the exercises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41522417712 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9085457071 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.125 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268369986537 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130758588604 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735203795291 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15299984907 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755066466794 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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