You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
Describe the item
Explain where and when you left it
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inquire about my suitcase which I lost while travelling from Delhi to Ajmer in Superfast Express. Let me explain the details of the incident.
To elucidate I lost my favourite suitcase which was turquoise green in colour and had a Samsonite brand name engraved on its back. Additionally, it was covered with travel stickers which not only gave the suitcase a unique look but also reminded me of my travel to some of the exotic destinations around the globe. Lastly, it has a black luggage tag which has my address and contact details. For your kind information, I was seated in B1 compartment on seat number 3G and the luggage was kept in the overhead storage box. Since the train arrived late from its scheduled arrival and I had to rush for an important meeting so I forgot the suitcase in the train. Although I realized this only when I reached my hotel and subsequently called your customer care representatives but it was already too late.
Hence I would request you to kindly help me in finding my suitcase as it contains important official documents which need to be submitted to the customers. If your team manages to find my suitcase then please call me on my cell number so that I can come and collect it from your office.
I look forward to your immediate response and cooperation in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inquire abo...
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Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: green
... favourite suitcase which was turquoise green in colour and had a Samsonite brand name engraved...
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Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ok but also reminded me of my travel to some of the exotic destinations around the globe. L...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...tatives but it was already too late. Hence I would request you to kindly help me i...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse and cooperation in this matter. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69135802469 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.692320589 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3824679522 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0876212273079 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034609788454 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225451263495 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522674294436 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163372339162 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.