A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
The significance of industrialization such as a factory, manufacturing company, and other production farms have been prolonged all over the world as we are very comfortable to get byproducts namely foods, clothes and some commodities. As my community has come forward to build a large factory, I have a great endorsement on it despite the factory holds some downsides. I think it will create employment, socio and economic acceleration to my arena. My next sentences will explore the reasons for my agreement considering both good sides and downsides.
First and foremost, a closer look at the common functions at a factory illustrates that it applies machineries to convert products from one another. For instance, many of them manufacture clothes, flours, juices and to name a few. Also, numerous industries are making our daily lives easier. If such factories can be set in my location, my neighbor will get these commodities at a cheap rate. Recently, we have to keep an eye on some products, for example, papers, books, glue, etc., which come from other regions, thus we have to suffer in the long run. A factory can wipe out such issues with its manufacturing products.
Aside from fulfilling our demands of various goods, the factory will extend a hand to create employment for local people like stuff, labor, sweeper and to name a few. Moreover, many people will be provoked to make restaurant, tea-stall, shops, markets, rent houses for the guest, worker, and consultants of the company coming from other communities. So, a factory can flourish lots of changes in the community. When the factory will recruit the highly skilled educated officers, they will demand the speeded internet, a good medical service, educational convenient to inhabit my community, as a result, the disparage people of this area will enjoy also the convenient.
Furthermore, a factory conveys some drawbacks as it creates smokes, warms environment, causes deforestations, etc. Sometimes, the factory may fail to provide qualitative goods, as a result, many people oppose industrialization. However, I think we can overcome this issue by maintaining sustainable design, urbane planning, governmental aids. Moreover, we need to be cautious about using such machineries so that cannot harm society.
In conclusion, the aforesaid good sides and downsides depict the inevitability of a factory for having some products, earning scopes and a better life. As the negative effects can be overcome by taking some steps, I’m always in favor of making a factory nearby or at my community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...t to inhabit my community, as a result, the disparage people of this area will enjoy also the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26213592233 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05350996137 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594660194175 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6418084796 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117494841482 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040441652376 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405512747658 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717910049745 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242282087097 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.