Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.
Discuss both these views and give your own reason
Monumental city buildings are tourist attractions, and local authorities like to spend the budget on them. However, citizens need hospitals and schools as well. Although they are less prominent, this does not mean they are less important. I think governments should spend money on both types of buildings.
When you visit any city, you notice the buildings that stand out. Some constructions such as the World Trade Center in New York or the Burj Khalifa in Dubai or, which is the tallest building in the world, play a role in the cost-effective local economic. Tourists want to see these buildings and they spend money on products like souvenirs and specialities in the country at the same time. The buildings are not only used for important purposes like exhibitions, workshops and so on but also the best way to advertise the city. I believe that local government have to spend finance on that constructions if they want their country be well-known around the world.
On the other sides, the government must make sure that their people are looked after. If there are not enough schools or the school buildings are deteriorate, children cannot be educated properly. Similarly, society needs well-built hospitals to not be overloaded and lack of medical infrastructures. Where I live, we have a lot of medical facilities which are large and modern, but they cannot respond when so many are ill at the same time.
Overall, it is necessary for both types of buildings to develop fly side by side. Governments should distribute capital plausibly not only for city building because they need to convert the standpoint of the global in their country but also they should make sure that they have sustainable school and hospital for their citizens.
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- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your own reason 61
- Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals.Discuss both these views and give your own reason 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'deteriorated'.
Suggestion: deteriorated
...ugh schools or the school buildings are deteriorate, children cannot be educated properly. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01030927835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7601198299 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7184964464 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201143236788 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682088813484 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465136966861 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118754147199 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178305086096 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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