The environment we are living in is in danger due to the various problem. Whose responsibility is to solve these problems government, a private organization, or individuals? And what measures can be taken? (If choose individual).
In the last decade, we have witnessed massive industrialization and urbanization. This expansion of economic and social activities has led to dangerous problems impacting to the environment. Experts are debating over this phenomenon, and arguing over the responsibilities. Many have a view that it is the role of government to control these severe conditions, however, others have opposite views blaming industries and individuals. In this article, we will discuss various measures to eradicate global warming and steps to preserve the atmosphere.
To begin with, the whole cycle of ownership in this detrimental situation should start with legislation, they are responsible for forming and imposing stricter environmental laws, they should be fined the industries releasing toxic gases in the environment. Moreover, industries need to be aware of the deteriorating state of the planate and hence, reduce deforestation for the expansion of economic activities.
On the other hand, individuals have a bigger role to play in this whole ecosystem. Being a good citizen they should not use plastic materials containing harmful and dangerous compositions. Furthermore, they should use public transport system and avoid using cars adding burning of fossil fuels.
In conclusion, from the above arguments, it is evident that for protecting the environment for future generations and species all section of the societies including the government, industries, and individuals will have to work together, cognitively and holistically.
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| 2019-04-07 | Rajnikant Chauhan | 77 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79646017699 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3233358311 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632743362832 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5370653846 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133939396816 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467683896642 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334564064912 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711075324931 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226413580394 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.