Some people arrgue that girls and boys should be educated saparately while others think that it is more advantaguous for children to study at a same school. What is your opinion?
It is sometimes argued that children should attend single-sex school to gain a better result. while I agree that all-girl and all-boy schools can bring some benefits to the children, I would argue that co-education is the best environment for students to study.
On the one hand, a single-sex school makes students concentrate more on studying to achieve the best academic performance. when girls and boys turn to puberty period, they tend to be more curious about the opposite gender and easily fall in a relationship, which can lead to their neglect on studying. Separate education can avoid these distractions. Moreover, teachers in these schools know their student’s needs better, so that boys and girls who have different physical and mental characteristics have more opportunity to meet their distinct needs. For instance, girls appear to be more enthusiastic in social science subjects like psychology, literature whereas boys more likely to interest in physical activities. Being understood these differences well may help students receive more efficient education.
On the other hand, I would argue that it’s healthier and more beneficial for children to attend a mixed school. In actual fact, co-education is an epitome of real society, to which boys and girls have to face when they graduate and join the workforce. By having come in contact with the other gender in the school years, they can understand and sympathize with each other in order to treat them better. In addition, a curriculum in which boys and girls are treated equally, for example, they use the same workbook, join in the same activities help students feel more confident and take out social statuses.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that single-sex schools can bring some advantages in studying, I am still convinced that co-education is the best environment for students to gain the best result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23778501629 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85272476764 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6413027309 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307682771923 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111453194888 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456922436413 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19050042752 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347309894547 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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