The given diagram illustrates the information about the manufacturing and procedure of dairy products and milk for sale in market.
It is vivid from the given diagram that firstly cows graze on grass in the field. Following this, milk is taken twice a day with the help of machines and store in refrigerator. Moreover, milk is delivered to dairy through tanker regularly.
Leaping further, in the Dairy process of milk is started and some amount of milk is converted into cheese,cream and butter which is packed in boxes and bottles. However, some amount of milk is put in bottles after the process of pasteurization. Furthermore, packed milk and dairy products are transferred to supermarkets and shops where they are ready for purchase by consumers.
Overall, it can be stated that there are eight stages involved in the production and process of milk and dairy products. All steps are interlinked with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cream
... amount of milk is converted into cheese,cream and butter which is packed in boxes and...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84463216128 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7152663005 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29737911505 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114861445105 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932606820564 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184286405747 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823426999142 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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