People aim to achieve balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to over come it?
It is claimed that keeping a work-life harmony for most people nowadays is just out of the question. This essay will point out reasons and solutions to tackle with them.
With the intensity of population explosion and the incessant rise of the market economy, most people seem to trap with the race to meet the social norm. In other words, to accommodate the desire of possessing certain valued properties such as housing, cars, facilities, an individual has to work harder for financial gains. Moreover, for those who after years of making great effort, that finally climb the ladder of success in their career, they are more likely to be attracted by the glory of the achievements and yearn for a higher self actualization. To fulfill such need, they inevitably become more reachable as a result of work extension and the increase in the number of related personnel, which leads to a further sacrifice of their personal life for the exchange of their desirable social recognition.
In order to overcome this issue, there are no other ways, but one’s will to set up a more reasonable timetable and schedule for their daily tasks. For example, instead of spending most of his or her being in the office, one can register a fitness or meditation class after work to boost their inner-self. Besides, they can also maintain some of their hobbies by sharing these with friends and family, especially in the weekends when most companies are off and undone tasks can be put aside until next Monday. In case, some people may still blame workloads as the culprit for their time loss, it is vital that they consult an expert of time management so that they could acknowledge what to prioritize in their agenda.
In conclusion, a compromise between material and spiritual life seems to be very challenging to accomplish due to several reasons belonging to modernization. However, time arrangement should be the key to any problems related to our social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94848484848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68579400548 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6922577296 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138579780033 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474617747553 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313137002317 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766564856669 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241086110941 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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