You are An, the president of the youth club in your secondary school. On behalf of the members, write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at one of your club’s meetings. In your letter, you should:
- introduce your club
- give the reasons why you want to invite this person
- tell him/her about the arrangements for the meeting.
Dear Chi Pu,
How have you been doing recently? Is your recent schedule affected by Coronavirus outbreak during these days? Through warm contacts, I know your email address. I am the leader of the youth club in X secondary school. On behalf of all the members, it gives me great pleasure to invite you to make a speech at my
club’s meeting on this Saturday.
As you may know, during quarantine period, poor people lost their jobs and do not have enough money to purchase food, beverage and to pay the rent at Hanoi city. Our club is doing a campaign with the hope of raising funds, collecting old clothes and other necessary stuff, which are expected to donate to the impoverished. When it comes to your great contribution to society, especially the youth development over the past few years, I do believe that you are the most appropriate person for our meeting. Besides, our meeting disseminates meaningful and humanitarian messages to the community, which you are always prone to.
If you accept our invitation, could you please to be available on your facebook’s livestream at 8pm on next Monday.
I hope you can make time to attend our meeting. Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Chi Pu, How have you been doing recently? Is you...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1012.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86538461538 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71065179175 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5530444904 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376709875279 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130342666257 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683580500549 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200762139137 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705621917948 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.