It is true that opening of massive shopping complexes are becoming increasingly popular. Whether or not this is good thing for the people to shop from malls instead of small shops is debateable. On the face of it, the advantages seem most apparent, but could there be a downside to this phenomenon of having large complexes as well?
Lets begin with by looking at the advantages of opening new shopping centres. One of the main positives of a mall is that it promotes economic growth. What I mean by here is that they opens up lot of new jobs and helps the local economy. Since super markets attract a larger number of consumers, so the area surrounding them also tends to develop.
Secondly, supermarkets have made shopping easy and hassle-free. When a customer can buy all what they need from one shop, they save time and money. They don’t have to go from shop to shop looking for canned rice or bottle of milk. It is this convenience that makes supermarkets popular with customers.
Turning to the other side of the argument, supermarkets have certainly made small shops redundant. Many of them have shut down because they cannot compete with a big store that sells just about everything at one roof. So while super markets provide jobs to some people, they also cause loss of employment for some others.
All things considered, it is clear that this situation is not as straightforward as it first appears. You need to weigh up the pros of economic growth, people comfort and so on, and the cons of redundant of small shops and impulse shopping. Personally, I believe the benefits in term of entertainment eventually out weigh any negatives.
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'open'
Suggestion: open
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, i mean, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84561403509 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73741334569 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8079037419 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25687876376 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804973976032 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738455918024 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13220028539 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651140953897 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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