Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
Some people may insist that studying about the past is not useful and it is better to focus on the present. But in my opinion, learning about the human's histrory is helpful in many ways. I completely disagree the statement that learning about the past has no value for people who live in the nowadays.
First of all, present is the consequences of what human have been passing. All of the knowledges, constructions and cultures that we use are developed in the past. So, without knowing about the past, it is also hard to understand the present. For example, when I want to write a thesis, it is always based on the published papers which relate about topic of my research. I need to find out relative study because sometimes the topic of mine are already presented or I can get some useful information about my thesis' topic. The past things are always helpful.
Secondly, we can avoid possible danger from the past experience. For example, wars are always making awful results. To be specific, nuclear bomb can make terrible results which everyone are not expected. Nowadays, every people know about the possible results of the awful weapon due to experience that destroyed two whole cities in Japan. After that, all of people in this planet don't want to see the bomb is operated again. From the past experience, people can anticipate the possible results and make a clever decision.
To sum up, we should learn the past's wisdoms in order to live more wise. Everything we have is the results of the past and that is why we have to learn about it. Furthermore, if we learn about the past, our decision making will be more wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...uences of what human have been passing. All of the knowledges, constructions and cultures ...
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Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
..., we can avoid possible danger from the past experience. For example, wars are always making aw...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...fter that, all of people in this planet dont want to see the bomb is operated again....
^^^^
Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ee the bomb is operated again. From the past experience, people can anticipate the possible res...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur decision making will be more wisely.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67708333333 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45909582886 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0993058216 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 110.228320801 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342649995912 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109675954871 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990199639717 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226311191188 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127172668927 0.0443174109184 287% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.3589403974 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.