No matter developing or developed countries, after the crime happened, send people to prison is the general solution. Others disputed to prevent individuals from committing the crime is to give them a better education. Thus, in my opinion, prevent crime and the solution of crimes are different functions to society. I will give my opinion in this essay.
It is common sense to control criminal personal freedom which sends them to the prison. Therefore, it becomes law during civilization improvement. The staffs who work in prison will teach them to recognize the fault that they made. Another perspective, stay inside is the new education of prisoner.
The responsibility of society is to prevent further crime. It is true to gain more knowledge will boost people mind. By giving an excellent education is not equal to the extraordinary students that we have. It is simple for adolescent or adult to make a dirty friend who could teach them to do crime in the complex world. For instance, the movie Mule is about the old man who had chat with his child's co-worker which ask him to carry the drugs from west to east American. Even he was an educated and honorable man, he wants the dollar so he delivered drug more than 20 times. Another significant reason in favor is that sometimes people change their mind or influence by someone easily. In some way, it is hard to handle people's mind inside.
In conclusion, I agree the reason for preventing crime is provide outstanding education but prison is necessary for contemporary society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73341507332 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2606897238 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5882352941 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219334098721 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648508255748 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626702239071 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128252938488 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449689289069 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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