Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree
A major reason for land and sea pollution is the usage of plastic shopping bags. A certain school of thought is of the opinion that its usage be forbidden. I completely agree with this view because would help reduce the amount of waste and also encourage use of environmental friendly paper bag. In this essay the reason for this view will be discussed in detail.
Firstly, stopping the use of plastic shopping bags will help reduce the quantity of waste products in circulation. It is common these days for people to liter the ground and waterways with these bags they use to carry major food and grocery products. An outright ban ensures that plastic waste do not find their way into the rivers and roads. For example, Rwanda banned the use of plastics in 2016 and has been voted the cleanest African country for the past two years.
Another point of note is that eradicating the use of plastic bags encourages use of other greener options like paper. In other words, paper shopping bags are easier to recycle and manage when compared with the plastic ones and as such reduces the potential for pollution. For example, scientific research shows that paper waste decomposes in a few days while plastic ones decompose in about hundred years.
In conclusion, although it is certain that as plastic bags contribute to pollution in our environment and needs to be banned. Humans also have a role to play in controlling pollution, they should be educated on the need to properly dispose their waste be it plastic or paper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ound and waterways with these bags they use to carry major food and grocery product...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...s while plastic ones decompose in about hundred years. In conclusion, although it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80988593156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4629451831 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551330798479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6058479355 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264237485201 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973081058136 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722691458304 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162780948442 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635866185816 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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